Close to perfect!

hook-A different day tomorrow? I asked myself as Mrs Nua, Our class teacher announced. We were to bring along to school with us, a change of clothes and maybe a towel. I was thinking why a towel, why a change of clothes? So After school I ran home eager to find out what was going to happen.
orientation- “I never knew that we could have this much fun at school apart from morning and lunch time!” There was a glamouris feeling among the intermediate block of the school walking down to the bottom field. The games had began, It felt like we were representing our countries at the London 2012 olympics.
para 1-So it would seem that we were obviesly playing games. I said to myself, “YAH” This was the first time that we had done something fun, out of the Ordinary. That is if you take out our Term 1 camping experience. Up to this point of the week I was more excited, not only because we were playing games but also having fun.
para 2-As our class lined up ready to have some fun, I noticed in the corner about 6-8 buckets stacked up. I thought that after this sight we were just bound to play at least one water game. We hit the bottom field with excitement ready to play some games. After the first game me and several other class mates were soaked in water from our first game with Miss Nua. I was dreading myself saying NO,NO,NO. This was a Brand new warriors shirt I was wearing. Well there’s a lesson to be learned, never wear brand new clothes for something you will get dirty in.
para 3-No Offense to my teacher Miss Nua, But this was when the fun kicked in! I still don’t know what this game is called, but in a way it is similar to dodge ball so I am going to call it ‘DODGE THE BALL’. Here are the rules. Two teams on the court at once, and one team has to run inside the limited space that they have while the other team has to try and hit you with the ball. Here’s the twist, the team that is holding the ball can’t move, all they can do is chuck the ball to their other team mates and touch the opposing team with the ball.
para 4-At this rate i had a feeling that we were going to win our first match of dodge the ball in style. Five out of seven of our people survived while we ran around. The other two people we recogonized them as the WEAK LINKS. Back to the game Already four of the seven people in the other team had been hit and gone. three to go! We won convincingly. There was also two other games played, but if I explained them this story would go on and on about how fun and cool they played out.
conclusion-If I were to write a 1000 word writing sample about the highlights of there year this experience would defiantly in it. So please Mrs Nua , Can we do this again.