Yesterday there was a DESTRUCTIVE tornado that struck the innocent citizens of Albany in the North Shore district at around 3.00pm. Enormous winds that flew at 200/kmph and tore roofs off houses and lifted trucks and cars off the very ground. There has already one fatility with an innocent man getting trapped in these FIERCE WINDS!!!! And also multiple injuries to 10-15 people!!!
Hi Kayde,
ReplyDeleteI like you tornado writing!!! It was a quite a tragedy that happened. I feel sorry for that innocent man who was killed! Anyway, I like the way you described the tornado "ENORMOUS WINDS". You really got my attention fast! Just a tip, maybe next time, you should read over and punctuate your writing. Other than that, AWESOME!!! Keep up the Fantastic work!!!
God Bless you.
From your good friend JOSHUA!!